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Title: My Lover's Gone
Author: dangerous_angel
Rating: PG
Word Count: 258 (I tried, I really did)

My Lover’s Gone
Montague doesn’t remember a thing. Not before the Vanishing Cabinet when they would flirt with each other when they weren’t trying to kill each other on the pitch, or after when her guilt drove her to accept a date with him.

After five years of seizures, temporary blindness, nightmares, delusions and hallucinations Angelina believed she was prepared for anything. Not this, though. She isn’t prepared for Montague’s look of utter confusion when the healers tell him who she is. She isn’t prepared for how cold he is afterwards.

The healers tell her to be gentle with him and try not to upset or confuse him. She doesn’t tell him the whole truth about them. They aren’t like other couples. They scream and shout and cause the neighbours grief. There’s an urge between them to consume and devour the other, to dominate and weaken them. They play games and test each other, driving each other to the razor’s edge. There’s more spilled blood between them than between enemies. They’re more than that to each other.

Angelina spins a story of star-crossed love overcoming all odds, using flowery words that turn her stomach. Montague ingests it all because the narrative is comfortable. His coldness is replaced by an attempt at warmth that will fill itself in later. It won’t be enough.

Montague does all the things he thinks is expected of him. He buys her roses, listens quietly when she complains about work, and rubs her back when she’s tired. He’s the perfect lover and everyday she loves him less.

[User Picture]From: redcandle17
2006-09-06 11:19 pm (UTC)
OMG. It's so twisted and fucked up and 100% classic Gryffindor/Slytherin. Naturally I love it. Just...damn. I can't even find the words to say anything else. It definitely reminds me why you inspired me to start shipping A/M.
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[User Picture]From: luckybrans
2006-09-07 01:16 am (UTC)
Thanks! I saw your post pleading for amnesia drabbles and I had to write something. I didn't mean for it to be twisted, but I've been inspired by an old OTP of mine, so I'm glad I could make you happy.
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[User Picture]From: pandapremium
2006-09-07 12:43 am (UTC)
Oh it's so sad! I love it. Angelina should have included that if he doesn't give her attitude then she'd kick him out.
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[User Picture]From: luckybrans
2006-09-07 01:18 am (UTC)
Thanks! Angelina wouldn't kick him out no matter how bad things got. She's a masochist that way.

I must say the icon made me giggle a lot.
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From: (Anonymous)
2006-09-07 03:25 pm (UTC)

My Lover's Gone

Oh, this is SO sad, and I really liked it.
Poor Montague...and poor Angelina she just got the perfect guy!!
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[User Picture]From: luckybrans
2006-09-08 01:29 am (UTC)

Re: My Lover's Gone


poor Angelina she just got the perfect guy!!
I love the phrasing of that. Angelina has the man most women would kill for and we feel sorry for her. All is not right with the world.
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[User Picture]From: x_posed_again
2006-09-08 12:06 am (UTC)
you are......... amazing! That's the only word I can find and it doesn't do you one ounce of justice.
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[User Picture]From: luckybrans
2006-09-08 01:30 am (UTC)
Thanks! I'm blushing hard right now.
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[User Picture]From: blondesimone
2006-09-08 03:24 am (UTC)


Call me Keanu.

Awesome job. It's amazing because in one paragraph you show how faithful and loyal Angelina is by sticking with him through all the seizures and other side effects, and then in the next you show that their relationship is far from the sugary sweet stereotype. They gots issues. Then it goes even further to show that Angelina doesn't want the stereotype, she want's her dysfunctional Slytherin back.

Ah, wonderful.
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[User Picture]From: luckybrans
2006-09-09 03:14 am (UTC)
Thanks a lot!

They gots issues.
They really do, more than I even know about. Something about Gryff/Slyth pairings speaks to dysfunction. You just can't get past it.
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