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Title: That Look
Rating: G
Pairing: Angelina/Montague
Word Count: 100 (woo!)
Prompt: Amnesia
Author's Note: Consider it a prequel to Missing Memories. I really don't like how many times I used couldn't. 

Montague couldn’t understand why Angelina Johnson was looking at him that way.

 

It wasn’t an angry or a vicious look. It wasn’t a fearful or intimidated look. He couldn’t pin down what kind of look it was. Every time he caught her looking though, he couldn’t help but think that it appeared quite a sad look.

 

He could think of no reason for her to be looking that way. Did he do something particular nasty to her? He couldn’t remember if he did. He was in the hospital these last months…

 

Montague frowned and refused to think of it further.
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[User Picture]From: redcandle17
2006-09-06 11:15 pm (UTC)
I think you meant particularly instead of particular in the third paragraph. :)

Awwwwwww. Poor Monty and poor Angelina. It's so sad in a romantic way as befits someone named Montague.
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[User Picture]From: blondesimone
2006-09-08 03:28 am (UTC)
Thanks for the correction. Any suggestions for getting rid of the couldn'ts? They really bother me.
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[User Picture]From: redcandle17
2006-09-08 04:07 am (UTC)
I didn't even notice the "couldn't"s when I read it. I just re-read it and I can offer no alternatives.
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[User Picture]From: pandapremium
2006-09-06 11:26 pm (UTC)
So sad! I really liked this, good job!
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[User Picture]From: blondesimone
2006-09-08 03:28 am (UTC)
Thanks!
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From: (Anonymous)
2006-09-07 06:26 pm (UTC)

That Look

This is so sad.... I loved it..
I just wondered how he knew it was Angelina Johnson ???
Thanks
Pippi
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[User Picture]From: blondesimone
2006-09-08 03:29 am (UTC)

Re: That Look

Thanks!

I have no idea how he knew it was her. Maybe his heart was secretly calling out to her. Or maybe I'm not good with plot mechanics, heh.

You should get a livejournal and starting writing!
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[User Picture]From: pippii
2006-09-13 05:08 pm (UTC)

Re: That Look

Hi,
Now I finally did it...I got a Livejournal.
It is all thanks to you guys..
Thanks
Pippii
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